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Offbeatlion in a coma
Posts: 1,128 Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: jmu |
WarioWear?! In Computer Graphics we were given the assignment to design a T-Shirt, and the top 5 in the class will actually be produced and displayed at the school. Since im artisticly untalented and devoid of good ideas, I decided to make a shirt I would actually wear and make it myself.Amongst my cohorts, whenever something isnt going down the popular fallback is to crack open the N64 and play the classic Mario Parties. From that, this monstrosity came to fruition: Front:  Back:  I think it looks pretty classy, despite the fact wearing it will make me look like a supreme douchebag. However maybe thats part of its appeal... What do you guys think? [EDIT] Fixed bad image links |
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GuNn3rs14Banned
Posts: 286 Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Montreal,Canada |
its too empty, especially the back, ad some more stuff but its pretty cool i would wear it too ___________________ We don't like your kind around here. - The N-Philes Administration |
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hacker_renegade4406-8376-8516-1626
Posts: 1,967 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Miami |
i agree too empty ___________________ my brawl code - 3523-1770-5164 name: HACKR p.m. me with add
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Deaconanti-social commentary
Posts: 28,086 Join Date: Jul 2002 |
only the back is too empty but really it should just say wario ware and cut the image on the back altogether |
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SpawnLurking around...
Posts: 4,232 Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: The Netherlands |
Agrees with Deacon. the image on the front is very good. Keep it. But the image on the back... meh... lose it, or draw something in the same style as the front. |
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kinopioPunk's Not Dead
Posts: 14,644 Join Date: Nov 2002 |
I'd wear something more subtle, like just the nose and staches on a tshirt. Who am I kidding of course I wouldn't. ___________________ Now playing No More Heroes 2: Desperate Struggle Endless Ocean 2: Adventures of the Deep |
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MisterHero-DXLakitu
Posts: 979 Join Date: Sep 2004 |
I think the design needs to be re-started around a Yellow shirt rather than white, if you have the option. Other suggestable colors: Magenta, Blue, Pink It could use thicker lines, imo. It better reflects on the game's art direction as well as boldens the overall appearance of the design. What would be cool is it had 'Team member' or 'developer' or 'staff' on some part of the shirt.  Anyway my thoughts. Good luck on the final version.  ___________________  OMG POKEMANZ
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CJ ThunderWhycan'tIleavethisblank? Posts: 10,400 Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: SoCal |
Too empty? Are 95 percent of your people's bodies covered with tats? I think its very good, but NOT on a white shirt, I just don't like white that much. |
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danytocasun
Posts: 4,792 Join Date: Oct 2002 |
I don't think its too empty, IMO its good as it is. ___________________ dani tuga? 
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FAT2001Lakitu
Posts: 2,171 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 8===========> |
*spooges* |
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SouzetsuReady to Fly
Posts: 7,481 Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: California |
I like it. 
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sonicblueThundercougarfalconbird
Posts: 20,230 Join Date: May 2002 Location: South Florida |
Very cool, justs drop the image on the back. |
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TendoGamerJ.C.
Posts: 7,351 Join Date: Dec 2002 |
I'd lose the back image and all the text. So essentially it would just be Wario's mug. ___________________
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WazzupyAll The World Is Mad
Posts: 6,021 Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canada |
I agree. And maybe not so much squigglies off the moustache. |
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| NerdTuesday, March 6th 2007. | |
Offbeatlion in a coma
Posts: 1,128 Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: jmu |
The assignment is to fill the shirt up with as much as possible, so I was going to try to fill up space by continuing the squiggle onto the other side of the shirt. I agree that it looks kind out of place so I might just drop it and let my grade take a hit. Yeah, and I also think I'm going to use the sketch effect on the back too. The back image is really supposed to be small and unnoticable, just kind of on the top of the middle of the back. I this WarioWear is too clever to drop, so I might cling to it like a falling star. Bene Gratias for all the feedback though!
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CJ ThunderWhycan'tIleavethisblank? Posts: 10,400 Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: SoCal |
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Offbeatlion in a coma
Posts: 1,128 Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: jmu |
The assignment was to make a T-Shirt, and by the sounds of it, she wanted it to be VERY busy. Like, designs going down the sleeve and everything. It sounds to me shes more interested in making us work then us actually making a decent looking T-Shirt, so, Im just going to turn in whatever I want. |
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CJ ThunderWhycan'tIleavethisblank? Posts: 10,400 Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: SoCal |
Seriously, you should be learning art, form, color & balance among other things. Busy works sometimes but I don't think on a shirt. |
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